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-----Original Message-----
From: Burleson.Smith@usda.gov [mailto:Burleson.Smith@usda.gov] 
Sent: Tuesday, December 04, 2007 7:14 AM
To: Lee, Amanda I.
Subject: RE: CUE Methyl Bromide Final Rulemaking: Final Informal Draft

Amanda,

Here are my comments:

Page 16:  "Dec. XIII/13" probably should be "Decision XIII/13"

Page 32:  Check grammar before available stocks equation

Page 74-75:  What is happening with NPMA assessment?

Page 90:  The second instance of "certain number" makes the section
awkward.  Try using the following in place of "certain number" in the
second part of the sentence:
"below a level that allows one competitor to reasonably estimate the
holdings of its competitors", or something like this.

Sorry that I can't give you a better review at this time.  Due to the
circumstances, I will remove my "reservation" regarding the Emergency
Rule as I cannot ensure that we will not miss the target of getting this
rule signed on time.

Let me know if you have any questions about these comments.

Burleson
202-215-2149 (cell)

