Hodayah
Finman/
DC/
USEPA/
US
11/
10/
2005
11:
25
AM
To
cc
bcc
Subject
Fw:
State
comments
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Forwarded
by
Hodayah
Finman/
DC/
USEPA/
US
on
11/
10/
2005
11:
22
AM
­­­­­
"
Lee,
Amanda
I."
<
Amanda_
I._
Lee@
omb.
eop.
gov>
11/
02/
2005
11:
24
AM
To
Ross
Brennan/
DC/
USEPA/
US@
EPA,
Hodayah
Finman/
DC/
USEPA/
US@
EPA
cc
Subject
State
comments
1.
First
sentence
on
page
3
should
read,
"
....
(
Protocol)
is
an
international
agreement
aimed
at
reducing
and
eliminating
the
production
and
consumption
of
stratospheric
ozone
depleting
substances."

2.
Page
14
last
para
­
should
we
mention
here
we
did
the
same
thing
for
CFCs
and
halons
to
strengthen
the
argument?

3.
A
few
typos:
Page
8,
second
sentence:
"
does"
to
"
do."
Page
9,
first
sentence
of
last
paragraph:
add
"
not"
after
"
should."
Last
line
on
Page
9:
"
2055"
to
"
2005."
Page
10,
first
full
sentence:
a
pair
of
quotation
marks
are
missing.
